Thursday, May 17, 2007

commaless

1. Though controversial subliminal learning appeals to many people.

2. Using specially prepared tape recorders communicate hidden messages to listeners.

2.5. Some people who want to learn supposedly without effort by listening to the tape.

3. To prevent shoplifting twenty major department stores started using subliminal tapes.

4. Of the twenty nine reported pilferage had decreased by about 37 percent.

5. Many people worrry that governments or businesses might use subliminal learning to control people against their will.

Knock yourselves out.

9 comments:

Avi said...
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Fajita said...

Impressive, didnt reckon you'd keep that comment up, and wouldnt've noticed either cept I wanted to see how you put in them commas in num. four.
And five is the big fat trick. ha ha. Hey, my prof. got the kick out of it...

Anonymous said...

Whatdya mean #4?

Still don't get five ('cept for the extra "r" in worry"...)

Avi said...
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Anonymous said...

controversial comma recorders comma want to comma but that's dumb cuz it's a badly formulated sentence sai vee shoplifting comma reported comma period paragraph break stupid trick delete one "r" yes tomorrow night berry exciting weeeeeeeird
gnight

Fajita said...

Ha Ha Ha Ha Haaaaaaaa! But you're so dummmmmbbbb!!! k fine, it's not nice of me to just sit here and laugh so hard at you beign so dum, but cuz I'm also a little bit nice and cuz youre a nice kinda person, I"ll let you in on the places of youre erroneous stupidity.
And they are: Sentence 2 and sentence 4. Hint for 4 is that you gotta look at 3 and make sure the number count works out. Hint for 2 is that hehe, you're just dumb:-p

but dum in a good way, duh. jah?

Fajita said...

Also, I left the triple R thing goin on over there, but I did fix the other editorial messups that you just so happened to slip over:D hehehe

Anonymous said...

K 2: tape comma. haha. I'm dum. sounded like one of those instructions on top of the standardized tests: using specially prepared tape recorders, communicate...

4: twenty comma. not fair. it can't be tolui on a diff sentence! especially when you had a 2.5 for the previous instance. Please convey my objection to your stoopy prof.

May the Lrd protect you and keep you.

Fajita said...

ooohh!!! Fheet is oh so proud:')
and it's a paragraph, so it's gonna be tolui, and yes, I neglected to mention that cuz so did the prof.

(why do I feel like I'm getting back at her by doign the same thing to you? ich vaist nit:D but it's the troot)